tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post2741821791507900534..comments2023-07-09T06:40:48.925-04:00Comments on Aurora Springer: Breached hull - snippet for #WeWriWa #SciFi #romanceAurora Springerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-13855112110681861622017-09-23T19:53:20.445-04:002017-09-23T19:53:20.445-04:00This story is almost non-stop action. This story is almost non-stop action. Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-17986044948518147372017-09-23T18:05:55.455-04:002017-09-23T18:05:55.455-04:00Love the way the tension keeps increasing.Love the way the tension keeps increasing.PThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02077084023001310425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-5491671601254110662017-09-18T08:12:17.684-04:002017-09-18T08:12:17.684-04:00Thank you!Thank you!Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-36572523479431926112017-09-18T08:12:05.877-04:002017-09-18T08:12:05.877-04:00Correct. This story has several deaths, most from ...Correct. This story has several deaths, most from accidents. Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-50952032236764266542017-09-18T02:07:26.037-04:002017-09-18T02:07:26.037-04:00There's just enough tension to draw the reader...There's just enough tension to draw the reader in. Great snippet. Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-20982399117745213892017-09-17T21:24:29.760-04:002017-09-17T21:24:29.760-04:00I guess not everyone made it out. I like the tensi...I guess not everyone made it out. I like the tension level.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-26396992108500273572017-09-17T19:25:17.795-04:002017-09-17T19:25:17.795-04:00Thanks for the reassurance.Thanks for the reassurance.Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-32487757203486933852017-09-17T19:05:34.798-04:002017-09-17T19:05:34.798-04:00Great snippet. She's so fortunate to have othe...Great snippet. She's so fortunate to have others to share her escape. No, you haven't overdone the tension. You've done a great job drawing in the reader (me).Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-59322414571857555822017-09-17T18:58:27.498-04:002017-09-17T18:58:27.498-04:00Thanks. There is a quiet moment later in the lifep...Thanks. There is a quiet moment later in the lifepod, before the next disaster. Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-48663203773212299682017-09-17T13:32:33.007-04:002017-09-17T13:32:33.007-04:00It's good she's not the only one who made ...It's good she's not the only one who made it to the lifepod, but it sounds like some weren't so fortunate. Very suspenseful, but I don't think it's overdone. A first chapter needs to pull the reader right in and this does - but you might have a brief 'quiet moment in the middle so the reader gets a chance to catch their breath, even for a few moments.Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-38381163741221013422017-09-17T12:37:31.502-04:002017-09-17T12:37:31.502-04:00Did I overdo the tension? It's like this for t...Did I overdo the tension? It's like this for the whole of the first chapter. Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-9961240350077349592017-09-17T12:04:58.829-04:002017-09-17T12:04:58.829-04:00Yikes, this is so tense! Yikes, this is so tense! Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-34363545885916225982017-09-17T12:04:07.179-04:002017-09-17T12:04:07.179-04:00Thanks!Thanks!Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-38000767730048974422017-09-17T12:02:47.283-04:002017-09-17T12:02:47.283-04:00There's a lot more suspense.There's a lot more suspense. Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-34719153221730893542017-09-17T12:01:54.577-04:002017-09-17T12:01:54.577-04:00Lol!Lol!Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-75461456296395310352017-09-17T11:49:06.617-04:002017-09-17T11:49:06.617-04:00Fabulous tension. I'm worried for them.Fabulous tension. I'm worried for them.Kimberly Gouldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623715828708451552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-61133118685378727232017-09-17T11:18:08.276-04:002017-09-17T11:18:08.276-04:00And the tension, suspense and high stakes stay ram...And the tension, suspense and high stakes stay ramped up! Very well done and of course I can't wait for more...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-50909673702762328162017-09-17T10:52:04.798-04:002017-09-17T10:52:04.798-04:00Nice tense scene, Aurora! The dangers of snacking...Nice tense scene, Aurora! The dangers of snacking, even in space!Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-84072421972202196742017-09-17T08:29:09.189-04:002017-09-17T08:29:09.189-04:00She hasn't even got there yet. Not all the mon...She hasn't even got there yet. Not all the monsters are dangerous. Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-17857368244069600682017-09-17T08:27:03.131-04:002017-09-17T08:27:03.131-04:00This story is one disaster after another with shor...This story is one disaster after another with short interludes. Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-51488428587272255342017-09-17T01:53:20.803-04:002017-09-17T01:53:20.803-04:00As of now, it seems like there are dangerous mons...As of now, it seems like there are dangerous monsters under the ice of Europa.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-83465548480874894542017-09-16T21:57:13.022-04:002017-09-16T21:57:13.022-04:00Oh glory, that can't be good. Good snippet, Au...Oh glory, that can't be good. Good snippet, Aurora.Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13653107467839760917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-70329582981858869242017-09-16T21:45:14.222-04:002017-09-16T21:45:14.222-04:00You have the right idea. This story has a few deat...You have the right idea. This story has a few deaths. Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3060145524274176402.post-87355371978426698962017-09-16T21:07:06.838-04:002017-09-16T21:07:06.838-04:00At least she's not completely alone, but it do...At least she's not completely alone, but it doesn't sound like everyone survived. Great snippet!Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.com