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I’m posting snippets from Rishalt, Book 2 of Taxyon Space.
Blurb
Dr. Nikki Bell is devastated when the Watchers
reappear without her alien lover. Why did Kiron return to his home planet
without even leaving a message? In search of answers, Nikki jumps at the chance
to join the diplomatic team invited to visit the aliens’ home world. On
Rishalt, she must contend with the intricacies of Warrish society and an
undercurrent of hostility.
Kiron Arqin Ramis is
summoned home by his family to the unwanted honor of a new triad and union with
a high-ranked female. Unable to forget Nikki, he endures a perilous exile on a
wilderness planet instead of complying with his family’s demands. But, the
Triarchs have other plans for him.
Stakes are higher than
the lives of two individuals. Earth leaders are desperate to acquire the
aliens’ interstellar technology, while Warrish dispute the benefit of an
alliance with inferiors. Can Nikki and Kiron pierce the barriers separating
them to find happiness with provoking an unequal war?
Kiron
has been summoned to his home planet by his family. Note, in Warrish society,
adults form triads, units of three men or three women, often siblings. In last
week’s snippet, he met the fake smiles of his six parents – two birth parents
and their triad siblings.
You
can read last week’s snippet here –
I
have skipped a few lines and introduced semicolons to fit.
Quickly bending at the waist, he raised his palms to cover his
face. The traditional greeting to his family elders gave him a chance to mute
his expression of dismay; in his experience, meetings with his parental hexath
never ended well. What did they want from him today?
His father, Persiron, stepped forward, arms outstretched,
“Welcome home, son. We are proud of your accomplishments on the remote ocean
world. The Triarchs have commended you for providing insight on these
Earthers.”
Overwhelmed by this unexpectedly favorable reception, Kiron
mumbled an expression of gratitude. Why had he been summoned? Surely, the
Triarchs would wish him to work with the Earthers. He tensed, waiting for his
elders to provide the true reason for his abrupt summons.
Rishalt is published!
Two alien worlds. Two lovers torn apart. Twist
the hyperthreads into unity.
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As always, I’ll be happy to reply to your comments.
Yeah, I wouldn't trust that either. Good snippet, Aurora. :)
ReplyDeleteI have fun with family dynamics in this chapter.
DeleteYes, it definitely sounds like they want something. Nice snippet! :)
ReplyDeleteAnd they expect he will be happy to comply.
DeleteBeware of smiling hexaths!
ReplyDeleteLol!
DeleteI'd say he has good reason to be a bit suspicious. Interesting snippet.
ReplyDeleteOf course he does.
DeleteOy! I am tensed too, waiting for this bombshell to be dropped.
ReplyDeleteIt drops slowly. I'm not sure how I'll arrange the snippets.
DeleteOh yes, there's obviously something up here...enjoyed the snippet!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteJust as he's waiting anxiously to discover why they sent for him, I am too. Can't wait to read more.
ReplyDeleteI like to keep readers in suspense
DeleteI’d be suspicious too. 😒
ReplyDeleteYes. Poor Kiron has learned to anticipate bad treatment.
DeleteI hope he stays on his toes and doesn't trust them!
ReplyDeleteHe might not trust them, but in this society, he must honor his parents commands.
DeleteSo far, so good. But I think he’s right to remain suspicious. With so many parents, it can’t ever be that simple!
ReplyDeleteTrue, although he rarely meets all six at once.
DeleteDoesn't sound to me like anything good is coming his way. Nice build up, Aurora.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteMeeting everyone at the same time sounds overpowering. They definitely have an agenda.
ReplyDeleteIt's not a happy family gathering!
DeleteThat's just too many parents. LOL! I hope his fears are unfounded. Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteIt is, although their leaders claim it stabilizes society - everybody is more closely connected.
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