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Warriors.
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and healthy holiday.
Reading is a safe
pastime during the pandemic. Sample the work of a new author. Read snippets of
stories in different genres.
I’m writing a new fantasy romance about a witch and an elf. The main character, Bridget Bramble, lives in a small cottage on the outskirts of a village. Her plans to go on a foraging expedition in the woods go awry when a troop of armed men marched into the village and beat up the residents.
You can read my last
snippet here: https://auroraspringer.blogspot.com/2020/12/a-furious-witch-snippet-from-fantasy.html
Note, it is an unedited
draft of the story. Your comments are valuable.
A scream, abruptly cut short, propelled
her into action.
Her thoughts buzzing in alarm, she ran to the chest by her bed and grabbed her most precious belongings, the bag of her best buttons, her sewing kit, and carving tools. She stuffed them in a satchel along with a spare shirt. She hesitated over her three books. The herbal treatise and book of ballads would be too heavy to carry a long distance, although she decided to keep her great grandparents’ travel journal. Its pages had a wrinkled cover of oiled leather. She wrapped the small book in a cloth. She grabbed the pouch of medicinal herbs, her tin cup for heating water, and added food from the shelves, the rest of the barley cakes, strips of smoked mutton and dried fruit stored for winter.
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She hoisted the straps of the laden
bags onto her shoulders and flung her cloak on top. Cautiously opening the rear
door, she peered out. Just beyond the doorsill, a well-trodden path led uphill into
the woods. Raspberry and currant bushes lined the path and provided a screen
from the marauders in the village.
Heart thumping in fright, she lowered her hood over her head. She crouched below the tops of the bushes and scurried up the path into the shelter of the trees.
Draft Blurb
In a land troubled by invaders from the east,
Bridget Bramble lives in a small village where she barters herbs and carved
buttons. When marauders target her village and murder her family, she flees
into the woods. Armed with her Granny’s advice, and a bag of magic buttons, she
sets out on the perilous journey to Oakenwald, the fabled land where elves and
men live in harmony. As she travels farther from home, she encounters malicious
creatures from the worst kind of folktales.
Lost in the foothills of the mountains, Bridget
meets an elf, Windswift the Wanderer. He offers to guide her across the
mountain range. But what is he doing in human territory? Can an ordinary, or
almost ordinary, human girl trust a cold hearted elf?
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Yikes! I hope they don't see her fleeing! Intense!
ReplyDeleteGood. A first chapter should pull readers in.
DeleteI approve of her hesitation before leaving any books behind, even if in the end, she realized she couldn't take them all.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely. It also shows she can read.
Deleteoh wow, intense snippet this week.
ReplyDeleteI think they've all been intense so far.
DeleteI so admire her calm choices under such a stressful situation. Run, girl! Run!
ReplyDeleteShe is tough. But she'll be doing a lot of running.
DeleteI hope she makes it to a safe place. Tense snippet but really good...
ReplyDeleteThank you. But is any place safe?
DeleteMaking decisions under pressure is hard. Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteShe seems to be under control. Mostly.
DeleteHope she's safe.
ReplyDeleteFor the moment.
DeleteI hope she gets safely away.
ReplyDeleteShe does get away.
DeleteShe's got a good, calm head on her shoulders. Shows that she can assess the situation and her options well even under great duress. I like her character!
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteHow horrible, to have to leave so much - and so many - behind that quickly.
ReplyDeleteYes, but she is lucky to escape.
DeleteBridget is a savvy and resilient heroine. I like her!
ReplyDeleteLove this beginning! I am pulled into this story. Nice writing!
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year, Aurora. I hope 2021 brings good things to you!
Thanks Teresa and Happy New Year to you!
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