Welcome to another
Sunday with Weekend Writing Warriors and Snippet Sunday. Reading
is a safe pastime during the pandemic. Sample the work of a new author. Read
snippets of stories in different genres.
I’m posting snippets
from my new fantasy about a witch and an elf. The book is up for preorder. The
main character, Bridget Bramble, flees her home when a troop of armed men plunder
the village and kill her brother. She decides to seek the fabled land of Oakenwald
where men and elves live in harmony. Her Granny had traveled from Oakenwald when
she was a child. She told Bridget about the elves. “Their long hair gleamed like silver when they danced
in the moonlight at festivals.” So,
Bridget knows the elves were friendly to their human neighbors or at least they
were friendly sixty or seventy years ago.
So far, Bridget has trodden
a well-known trail, familiar from trips with her father up to five years earlier
when he died. It has changed and malicious creatures now threaten travelers. After
walking for six days, she has reached a cliff at the foot of the mountains and
is looking for the place her father called ‘the stairway into the mountains.’
You can read last week’s
snippet at https://auroraspringer.blogspot.com/2021/01/the-end-of-familiar-trail-snippet-from.html
We continue, although I’ve
skipped some sentences with spoilers.
Before she had counted seventy
paces, the trail ended at an enormous pile of boulders. Sometime during the
last five years, a massive landslide had obliterated the original path and
blasted rocks over a large swath of the mountainside. She imagined the thunderous
roar as the top of the cliff cracked into an avalanche. Huge boulders had crashed
downhill, flattening the pines on the lower slopes.
Panic stabbed her. How could she reach Oakenwald if she couldn’t even ascend into the mountains? Her spirits plummeted into despondency. Was she trapped in the wilderness? She felt like screaming in frustration or pounding her fists against the unyielding rock. But, she dared not risk making a noise and attracting predators.
And a little more:
Leaning her hands against the
vertical rockface, she stared up at the jagged peaks that towered beyond the
first cliff. She bit her lip uncertainly. How could she cross over the mountain
range? Where was the stairway?
Alerted by a prickling at the
back of her scalp, she swung around to confront the danger.
A hooded figure stood in the
shadows under the trees.
I’m sure you can guess who is watching her. If all
goes well, you’ll meet him next week.
Fantasy romance. A young witch escapes the destruction of her home and embarks on a perilous quest for the fabled land where elves and humans live in peace.
In a land threatened by cruel invaders from the
east, Bridget Bramble lives in a small village where she barters herbs and
carved buttons. When marauders target her village and murder her family, she
flees into the woods. Armed with her Granny’s advice and a bag of magic
buttons, she sets out on the perilous journey to Oakenwald, the fabled land
where elves and men live in harmony. As she travels farther from home, she
encounters malicious creatures from the worst kind of folktale.
Lost in the foothills of the mountains, Bridget
meets the elf, Windswift the Wanderer. He offers to guide her across the mountain
range. But what is the elf doing in human lands? Can an ordinary, or almost
ordinary, human girl trust a cold hearted elf to lead her to safety?
Epic fantasy adventure and romance with darker
overtones. This story weaves elements of folklore and a quest for a safe haven
in a land where magic is real.
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[Releases on February 3rd.]
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Oh I wonder whether he's a friend or foe. Scary moment, very well captured.
ReplyDeleteShe is certainly frightened.
DeleteOoh, what an action-packed snippet! Looking forward to learning more about this "hooded figure." Great work!
ReplyDeleteThanks. I prefer action-packed stories.
DeleteWell done. Its not clear how she can keep going, and the hooded figure does not seem promising.
ReplyDeleteExactly. This is a pivotal scene.
DeleteEnter, the Wandering Elf. :-) Looking forward to reading this. :-)
ReplyDeleteYou are correct. More next week, and it releases soon.
DeleteWhat a place to stop! Well done snippet and can't wait for more...
ReplyDeleteIt's coming! Thanks.
DeleteYou do know how to capture our curiosity. who is this stranger? Friend or foe?
ReplyDeleteThat's exactly what Bridget is wondering.
DeleteShe's literally between a rock and a hard place. And BTW, I have no idea who the stranger is.
ReplyDeleteShe is - and you can read the blurb for a hint.
DeleteYes, I believe the wandering elf has just wandered into her life. Just in time, too! :) Can't wait to see that meeting!
ReplyDeleteYes - a pivotal meeting.
DeleteGreat snippet. Ed took my comment. LOL. Great minds... We will see if this hooded figure knows of a way through.
ReplyDeleteIt's not so easy, but he's willing to try.
DeleteI'm curious to know who is there.
ReplyDeleteGood.
DeleteAn elf, maybe? He could show her the way if he wanted to.
ReplyDeleteMaybe he will.
DeleteSqueeee..! I love hooded figures and mysterious men. Yum.
ReplyDeleteYes. This one has a lot of surprises for her.
DeleteYou've shown her frustration -- and determination -- very well.
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