Welcome to another Sunday
with Weekend Writing Warriors.
Meet writers in various genres and read 8-10 sentence snippets of their
stories.
I’m posting snippets from
my forthcoming release, Cosmic Rift, Book 4 in the Grand Masters’ Galaxy.
Blurb
Empath
Violet embarks on a new and desperate mission to find her missing lover.
Violet’s
happy family is shattered when Athanor Griffin vanishes. The formidable Grand
Master might have teleported anywhere in the galaxy. Violet strives to find her
psychic partner, while looking after their baby and fulfilling his duties on
the Council. Her frantic search uncovers a new threat to galactic civilization
along with resurgence of the infamous Ixioth slavers. The Council dithers in
response to her call for action, and even her former allies believe the Griffin
is dead. She must risk her son, her psi-powers, and her life to rescue her
beloved mate in the hope they can unite to fight the menace.
Informal
Tag line: Even galaxy-trotting heroines
need a babysitter.
You
can read last week’s snippet here: http://auroraspringer.blogspot.com/2017/06/amarylla-threeleaf-snippet-from-cosmic.html
I’ve
skipped ahead to a new scene and new characters. In her search for Athanor, Violet visits the next
place on his agenda, the planet of Ravaleen, Meilai of Marina. Violet learns of
explosions and a possible attack on a southern island. She and Ravaleen
teleport there to investigate.
Apologies
for creative punctuation to fit into 10 sentences.
They emerged on a beach of tawny sand; fragments of shell
littered the shore from the tideline above the lapping waves to the base of the
craggy cliffs further inland. A line of people trudged toward a spaceship,
poised ready for blastoff. Six-legged aliens with glossy black carapaces
scuttled alongside the line of thin, hunched figures, the blue-hued inhabitants
of the islands.
Shielding quickly, Violet flung a cloak of invisibility over
herself and Ravaleen. Her swift action worked as far as she could tell, no one
looked at them or raised an alarm. A small figure caught her attention by the
dazed torment of her mind and wobbly legs; the scrawny girl stumbled and fell.
The nearest alien lashed an energy whip at the cringing child; whimpering, the
girl scrambled back into the line, her pain and misery seared into Violet,
hardening her resolve to save them.
“What are they?” Ravaleen whispered, tilting her dainty chin at
the slave masters.
“Voids!” Violet swore, “I’ve seen their hellish kin in Athanor’s
memories; they’re Ixioth slavers.”
Her tone rising in fury, Ravaleen hissed, “Kill them!”
Now
you have met one of the key antagonists in this story, adding a further impetus
to Violet’s search.
Cosmic Rift, Book 4 in the
Grand Masters’ Galaxy is
on pre-order for $2.99 and releases on June 23rd at: Amazon iBooks Kobo B&N
To
encourage new readers of this series, Grand Master's Trilogy, the boxset of Books 1-3 is discounted to
$2.99 through this weekend.
Solstice Special 99c Sale in SciFi Romance runs June 16-19: http://author.carolvannatta.com/solstice-sfr-99-cent-sale/
I
may have to skip the next two weekends since I’ll be in the UK visiting my
family and possibly without internet for a few days.
As
always, I’ll be happy to reply to your comments.
I can understand why Ravaleen would give that command. I would not want to witness that at all. I'm curious to know what happens next. :)
ReplyDeleteRavaleen is outraged, but she has been lax and did not notice the invaders on her domain.
DeleteThis scene is about to turn bloody.
ReplyDeleteGreen blood? There will be a fight.
DeleteA fight is about to start! Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteQuite a vivid scene, with high stakes going on. Very effective excerpt!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteLove the idea of cloaking for safety. Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteThe Grand Masters have many of my favorite superpowers.
DeleteVery visual scene. They seem like they might be a bit outnumbered so I hope they have backup available.
ReplyDeleteThey can emit deadly rays. But, backup is often valuable.
DeleteThings are about to get hot for sure.
ReplyDeleteOh yes!
DeleteYou've really captured the misery of that situation. No wonder she wants to act!
ReplyDeleteShe would rather fight than sit around agonizing about her missing husband.
DeleteI'm right alongside with Ravaleen's thinking here.
ReplyDeleteRighteous anger, although a little thoughtless.
DeleteFantastic descriptions!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteA vivid, intense excerpt, Aurora, really vivid imagery! (By the way, we do have internet here in the UK! LOL :) ) Hope you enjoy your trip over here.
ReplyDeleteUsually we have internet, but we booked a place without wifi for a week.
DeleteYay! Time for one of your epic fight scenes, Aurora!.
ReplyDeleteHope you have a wonderful break.
Thanks!
DeleteYou may have to wait for the book to release for the fight.