Welcome
to another Sunday with Weekend Writing
Warriors. Meet writers in
various genres and read 8-10 sentence snippets of their stories. Find a new
author and sample their work. Enjoy!
Best wishes for a wonderful holiday season!
I’m back
after a week’s vacation on the Gulf Shores to run another snippet from Jupiter,
Book 3 in Taxyon Space. Nikki and Kiron have been summoned by Prime Jadel.
You can
read my snippet from two weeks ago here: https://auroraspringer.blogspot.com/2018/12/a-trio-of-luma-snippet-from-jupiter-for.html
I’ve
skipped a few lines to where Nikki and Kiron meet Jadel.
Please excuse slightly modified punctuation.
The Prime
perched on the low wall around the pond. She wore a dress of lilac satin
embroidered with silver spirals and a tight bodice laced over her two pairs of
breasts. Her flawless, green complexion had an unearthly beauty, emphasized by
the triangle of three diamonds embedded on her right cheek; a mesh cap of
pearls bound in silver spirals crowned her bald head. Her gaze was inscrutable.
Immediately,
Kiron knelt and bent his head to touch the floor in the traditional obeisance;
he murmured, “Gracious Prime, your humble servant, Kiron Ramis Bell.”
In
Nikki’s opinion, he performed the ritual with unnecessary enthusiasm; lagging
by a reluctant half-minute, she prostrated herself in a similar fashion, and
quickly raised her head to intone the greeting. In Warrish perspective, she was
an inferior human, an alien Earther, yet she refused to give total obedience to
the Primes. Perhaps Kiron owed a greater debt to Tol-Jadel; the Prime had
released him from his family obligations in a manner that retained his honor
and even endowed him with higher status by her silver mark on his cheek.
In a
voice as musical as a songbird’s warble, Jadel trilled, “Ramis Bell Duad,
prompt to my command and favored by my luma.” She pointed at a stack of
cushions tucked under the arching fern fronds; “Sit before me.”
JUPITER:
A simple hop across hyperspace turns deadly,
crushing hopes for a human-Warrish alliance
Nikki and
Kiron Ramis Bell are studying the marine life of Rishalt when they are summoned
for an audience with the Prime. Tol-Jadel sets them the task of investigating a
hyperspace perturbation near Jupiter. They must return to the oceans of Europa
and prevent this anomaly from severing the hyperroutes between Earth and
Rishalt. But, tensions are rising between Warrish Watchers and the humans on
Galileo Station, and Earth’s governments are squabbling over the proposed
alliance with the aliens. Can Nikki and Kiron erase the obstacle before their
home planets are separated forever?
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You can
learn how the couple met in Book 1, EUROPA.
As always, I’ll be happy to reply to your
comments.
An intriguing description of their meeting.
ReplyDeleteYes. More suspense while they wait for Jadel's orders.
DeleteWell good for Nikki, I say! LOVE the descriptions as always - her clothes are fantastic. Enjoyed the snippet...
ReplyDeleteThanks. Jadel is meant to look fantastic.
DeleteVivid descriptions, and they are probably screaming in suspense wondering what she wants with them!
ReplyDeleteOf course, but I like to set the scene first. I suspect Jadel enjoys creating the suspense.
DeleteTwo pairs of breasts? You have literally gone Total Recall one better!
ReplyDeleteI like to make my aliens different!
DeleteWow, she seems very intimidating. I wonder what she'll have to say?
ReplyDeleteShe is the supreme leader of the Warrish.
DeleteYou describe her so well, and the ritual greeting, too. I love how Nikki shows respect for Prime yet doesn't give up her individuality. This story is so fascinating. Happy Holidays, Aurora.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteGreat descriptions as always!
ReplyDeleteI try to entertain!
DeleteWhat an imperious command. I love how you set these scenes, Aurora. So many layers. Have a wonderful holiday!!
ReplyDeleteImperious indeed. Thanks and enjoy your holidays!
DeleteVivid description.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteFantastic descriptions!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
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