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the work of a new author. Read snippets of stories in different genres.
I am posting excerpts
from my new Sci-Fi Romance, Lured by the Lion. This story is part of a new series,
Second Chances in Space, with
standalone stories about space pirates, spies and second chances for romance.
Relevant
background: Josie Yazzie, the captain of a small spacecraft, has flown to
another planet to visit her aunt. She is having lunch with her new acquaintances,
Penelope and her father, Leonardo Horlis, a widower still mourning his deceased
wife.
In
this excerpt, Josie is having lunch with them. She has aimed
snide comments at Horlis about being too busy to mope over her husband’s death.
In fact, she is nervous because she is strongly attracted to Leo and they are
sitting on opposite sides of a small table.
You can read last week’s
excerpt at: https://auroraspringer.blogspot.com/2022/04/moping-about-lost-loves-excerpt-from.html
The final sentence was: She could not hope to compete with his beloved dead wife.
Now, Leo Horlis has a chance to retaliate.
“You are fortunate to have an
occupation,” Horlis said. “Did you truly fly to Wicks Paradise solely to see
your aunt?”
“Yes. I had to deliver my
father’s bequest to her. It’s an ancient vase with greenish glaze.”
“Hah.” His eyes crinkled in
amusement. “You gave a priceless vase to a woman whose home is overrun with
cats?”
Eight
sentences plus a few more:
“Priceless?” Josie gasped. “Oh,
surely not. Anyway, she put it in a glass cabinet.” A bubble of laughter burst
from her lips, and she stammered, “Father can’t have known about her cats.” One
glance at the laugh twitching on his lips made her bury her face in her hands
to stifle her chortles.
To her surprise, he joined in
with a loud guffaw.
Growing calmer, she wiped the
tears from her eyes and looked at him.
He rubbed his face with both
hands, exhaled in a gusty sigh, and smiled. “My spacefaring lady, your visit
has done me good. I haven’t laughed so much in years.”
She wrinkled her nose, saying
tartly, “I’m glad you find me entertaining.”
Widow with a spaceship meets widower with a dangerous secret.
After the death of her ailing father, Jocelyn
Navarre Yazzie is free to roam the galaxy in the Star Condor, the spacecraft
she inherited from her deceased husband. She embarks on a trip to deliver her
father’s bequest to her aunt on a rural planet outside the civilized sectors.
A chance encounter with the crippled Leonardo
Horlis changes her future. Horlis suffers from a debilitating malady and
expects to live for less than a year. Josie is strongly attracted to him, yet
she cannot hope to compete with his beautiful dead wife, whose portrait
dominates his house and his memories. Sympathizing with his grief and illness,
Josie offers to transport him in her spaceship to the top medical center of the
ultracivilized inner planets.
Their attraction intensifies in the cramped
quarters of her spaceship. But, Leo has a dangerous secret that threatens to
terminate their voyage and their lives. Can Josie and Leo escape the perils and
vanquish the ghosts of their past to find happiness together?
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Lovely interaction between those two. I hope it'll continue this way.
ReplyDeleteYes. they do tend to spar with each other.
DeleteLaughter is a good way to start and keep a relationship.
ReplyDeleteTweeted.
Yes indeed.
DeleteGetting him to smile and laugh again is definitely a good thing.
ReplyDeleteIt's a good start, although they have to work through a number of misunderstandings before they get together.
DeleteNice little scene and really makes me wonder about this vase!
ReplyDeleteThanks. The vase is a green herring. It's main purpose was to bring Josie to this point. Teasing about cats and fur will continue.
DeleteGreat interaction. And as others are saying, yes, the vase is definitely becoming key here it seems.
ReplyDeleteIt's become a joke.
DeleteThat is a marvelous scene! I feel like they just crossed a big hurdle, and in the process made quite the connection!
ReplyDeleteThanks. His laugh seems a breakthrough. But, she still worried about the influence of his dead wife.
DeleteI like the way their dinner has gone. I just wonder what his dangerous secret is.
ReplyDeleteThat revelation doesn't come until near the end of the story.
DeleteLove the easy banter and shared laugh between the two.
ReplyDeleteThanks. But, they're not always so in tune with each other.
DeleteSounds like they're getting along famously. Shared laughter is always an ice-breaker.
ReplyDeleteExactly.
DeleteCats and a priceless vase. A recipe for disaster and laughter. Glad to see those two are getting along.
ReplyDeleteYes. For the moment.
DeleteAwww, what a cute scene.
ReplyDeleteYes. Though later ones are more edgy.
DeleteIt's a good start! The best relationships are between those who can make one another laugh. Tweeted.
ReplyDeleteCorrect. I love a good sense of humor in a man.
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