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I’m posting snippets from the beginning of my WIP, Rishalt,
Book 2 of Taxyon Space. The story begins on the submarine Galileo Station on Jupiter’s
moon, Europa, shortly after the end of Book 1.
Rishalt, Book 2 of Taxyon
Space
Draft Blurb
Kiron Arqin Ramis is
summoned home by his family to the unwanted honor of a new triad and union with
a high-ranked female. Unable to forget Nikki, he accepts exile on a dangerous
wilderness planet instead of complying with his family’s demands. But, the Triarchs
have other plans for him.
Stakes are higher than
the lives of two individuals. Earth leaders are desperate to acquire the
aliens’ interstellar technology, while Warrish perceive few advantages to an
alliance. Can Nikki and Kiron pierce the barriers separating them to find
happiness with provoking an unequal war?
You can read last week’s snippet here - https://auroraspringer.blogspot.com/2018/01/excitement-snippet-from-rishalt-for.html
As they entered, Major Tarlick
glanced around, and gave a quick nod of recognition. Gesturing at the screen,
he offered an unnecessary explanation, “Unidentified object on the starboard
perimeter. Tech Wong is transmitting the image to Earth.”
The statuesque Dr. Andersen
stopped at the rear of the room where her height allowed her to see easily over
the heads of the people in the front. At ten centimeters shorter, Nikki pushed
to the front of the awed group and peered out. Instead of the usual view of
dark water rippling over red bedrock, and fat seaslugs feeding on mounds of
microbes, a sphere the size of a house hovered on the left of the screen beyond
the dome of the Greenery. Transfixed by the sight of the shimmering sphere, she
froze. The iridescent surface of the sphere resembled the surface of Kiron’s
bubble shelter. A shiver of excitement raced through her.
“It’s the Warrish,” she cried.
Book 1, Europa, is available at: Amazon iBooks Kobo B&N GooglePlay
My series
Atrapako on Eden is now available at several retailers.
The Lady is Blue, Book 1
Reviewer’s
apt description - “A sassy human female and an arrogant, scaled alien spaceship
Captain collide. What could possibly go wrong? Or go right?”
Dragons of Vkani, Book 2
Rescue mission to hostile planet of scaly
aliens
That's going to increase the tension. An intriguing snippet! :)
ReplyDeleteNikki is certainly eager to see Kiron again. But...
DeleteOoh, I wonder if this will turn out as she expects?
ReplyDeleteIt's a long story!
DeleteI love your descriptive words in this snippet. Original and they create great visuals.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteTerrific description of the entire scene, very engrossing to read....great snippet!
ReplyDeleteThanks again.
DeleteI love how your snippets always feel like pure sci-fi! :D
ReplyDeleteThis story is pure sci-fi.
DeleteShe's excited now... but it can't necessarily be as good as she hopes, can it?
ReplyDeleteShe's excited. Other people are not.
DeleteAn exciting encounter, full of unknowns!
ReplyDeleteThe local fauna I mentioned are not so different from ours. The Warrish are a different matter.
DeletePulls you right in, Aurora! Is it too soon for her to hope . . .?
ReplyDeleteIf you read the blurb, you'll have the answer.
DeleteGood description and tension.
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It's been a crazy week here with 2 snow days.
DeleteI love your world building - blending familiar Terran aquatic types with more alien beings. Great snipet.
ReplyDeleteThanks - we have to have a point of reference.
DeleteI hope this goes as well as she seems to expect, but I don't think it will. Your description of the sea slugs. Saying they were fat made me shiver.
ReplyDeleteOh good. Of course, little will go as might be expected.
DeleteIt was easy to visualize, Aurora. I'm reading book one right now. :-)
ReplyDeleteGreat - I hope you enjoy it.
DeleteWhile reading this, I was also watching the scientists first entry into the alien spaceship in "Arrival." The book and the movie complemented each other perfectly.
ReplyDeleteI haven't seen that movie, but there are few truly original ideas. It is our execution and perhaps special twists make our stories unique.
DeleteSomehow, I think she's not going to be so happy once she knows who is in that sphere.
ReplyDeleteI hope that will not detract from your enjoyment of the snippets.
DeleteGreat snippet. I liked the descriptions.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteGreat imagery. Puts you right there in the scene.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteGreat visual. I'm excited for more. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks. More will be coming.
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