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I’m posting snippets from the beginning of Rishalt, Book 2
of Taxyon Space. The story begins on the submarine Galileo Station on Jupiter’s
moon, Europa, shortly after the end of Book 1.
Rishalt, Book 2 of Taxyon
Space
Draft Blurb
Kiron Arqin Ramis is
summoned home by his family to the unwanted honor of a new triad and union with
a high-ranked female. Unable to forget Nikki, he endures a perilous exile on a
wilderness planet instead of complying with his family’s demands. But, the
Triarchs have other plans for him.
Stakes are higher than
the lives of two individuals. Earth leaders are desperate to acquire the
aliens’ interstellar technology, while Warrish perceive few advantages to an
alliance. Can Nikki and Kiron pierce the barriers separating them to find
happiness with provoking an unequal war?
A strange sphere has appeared in the ocean
outside the submarine station.
You
can read last week’s snippet here –
The final line was: “The
Warrish?” Major Tarlick scowled. “Is it an attack?”
Note: I’ve skipped a few lines and abused
punctuation to fit into 8-10 sentences.
A commotion from the rear
heralded the entrance of Tech Albright. Big Al, unofficial leader of the
colonists, marched to the front and glared at the iridescent sphere, “Styx, our
green-skinned mermen have arrived in style.”
Tarlick protested, “They’re
attacking Bathos.”
Al slapped the major’s stiff back
and boomed, “We’d be bloody dead if they wanted to attack us. They could have
slaughtered us at any time in the years they’ve been on Europa. We can’t match
their technology; if they’ve got interstellar transport, they’re surely capable
of dropping a bloody big bomb.”
“Understood,” Tarlick groaned,
“If they’re paying a friendly visit, do you think we ought to send divers to
meet them?”
Director Foster said, “Major Tarlick is correct. We ought to
meet them in their own element as a neighborly gesture.”
Rishalt is now available for
pre-order at Amazon
Two alien worlds. Two lovers torn apart. Twist
the hyperthreads into unity.
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As always, I’ll be happy to reply to your comments.
Better to be friendly than to meet them with hostility. I hope those they're meeting feel the same. Nice snippet! :)
ReplyDeleteThis group of aliens are Watchers, trained to observe humans without interfering. Of course, that system broke down in Book 1.
DeleteI hope they’re right about preparing for a friendly visit. I’m a little worried. :-)
ReplyDeleteThey might be too.
DeleteLove this scene! Great job!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed book 1. Just pre-ordered this one.
ReplyDeleteWow - thank you! More convolutions ensue.
DeleteMuch better to greet them in a friendly way. Great snippet
ReplyDeleteI agree, if only everybody behaved sensibly.
DeleteWell, that could go either way, and be perceived similarly. Good snippet, Aurora. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks.
DeleteIt's been interesting to see how you're having beings from totally different environments interact.
ReplyDeleteIt's fun, although the beings and environments are not totally incompatible. Nikki can breathe underwater with devices in her nose, while the Warrish are amphibious. Their cultural differences are more critical for the story.
DeleteWell at least Al has some sense - whew. Although I have a feeling things won't go to smoothly. Terrific snippet, tells us a lot about all the factions.
ReplyDeleteYes, I have to introduce a bunch of people at the start of this story. Al is the voice of reason, even if vulgar at times.
DeleteGreat snippet - I enjoyed book 1 so I'm going to have to get this one as well, aren't I!
ReplyDeleteI hope so!
DeletePrecaution is always a good idea in such situations. Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteYou are correct & thanks!
DeleteI sure hope the meeting is friendly on all sides. Nice snippet.
ReplyDeleteThanks
DeleteEven if the meeting is friendly... do they know how to show this without seeming disrespectful? The situation is already pretty tense!
ReplyDeleteGood point. Nikki will try.
DeleteI curious to know how this will all play out.
ReplyDelete)I want to know more about Styx- the green-skinned mermen.) :)
You can read about the hero at the beginning of Europa, book 1.
DeleteWouldn't that be like double the danger if they go to the water?
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like a scary encounter to me so far.
Going into the water might be better than inviting the aliens into their station.
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