Welcome
to another Sunday with Weekend Writing
Warriors. Meet writers in
various genres and read 8-10 sentence snippets of their stories. Find a new
author and sample their work. Enjoy!
I’m
running snippets from the beginning of Jupiter, Book 3 in Taxyon Space.
JUPITER:
A hop through hyperspace turns deadly,
crippling hopes for a human-Warrish alliance
Nikki and
Kiron Ramis Bell are studying the marine life of Rishalt when they are summoned
for an audience with the Prime. Tol-Jadel sets them the task of investigating a
hyperspace perturbation near Jupiter. This anomaly threatens to sever the
routes connecting Earth and Rishalt. They must return to the ocean of Europa to
identity the cause of the disruption. But, tensions are rising between Warrish
Watchers and the humans on Galileo Station, and Earth’s governments are
squabbling over the proposed alliance with the aliens. Can Nikki and Kiron
erase the obstacle before their home planets are separated forever?
While
Nikki is recording marine animals, Kiron receives an unexpected call on his
qtel from their hostess, Sora.
You can
read last week’s snippet here: https://auroraspringer.blogspot.com/2018/11/sora-calls-snippet-from-jupiter-for.html
The last
line was: Nikki looked at him and raised her eyebrows in a question.
Note, I’ve
skipped a couple of lines. A hexad is 6 days and each day is about 30 of our hours.
He tapped the qtel on his wrist and
held out his hand in mute invitation. She furrowed her brow and shook her head,
clearly reluctant to quit her observation of the triales. A large cluster of
the flower-like animals covered the bottom of this submarine valley; Nikki had
already netted a hexad of the mobile triales that were destined for an aquarium
in Sora’s laboratories.
As Nikki bent down to examine the
triale, he dove toward her. Holding her shoulders and pressing his lips to her
ear, he said, “Sora calls.”
She scrunched her face in annoyance.
Instead of complaining, she lowered the camera onto her chest, repacked her kit
and tucked it into the side pocket of her backpack. She knew how indebted they
were for Sora’s hospitality. They had spent five peaceful hexads living with
Sora and her triad sister, while Nikki collected data on the local wildlife. During
the day, they had explored the preserve, and in the evenings, they shared
stories of other worlds with the sisters.
You can
learn how the couple met by reading Europa.
EUROPA is 99c this month.
(99c from
the 5th for Kobo and Googleplay)
As always, I’ll be happy to reply to your
comments.
Fascinating snippet. I felt right in as I read the snippet.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you liked it.
DeleteInteresting snippet ... and great cover!
ReplyDeleteThanks. An "eye-catching" cover!
DeleteI'm very curious as to what Sora wants. Intriguing!
ReplyDeleteGood. That's what I want to hear.
DeleteHer annoyance at being interrupted seemed very true to life.
ReplyDeleteYes. As a marine biologist, Nikki is very focused on her research.
DeleteSora calls- such power that they dropped everything to go to her. I'm intrigued.
ReplyDeleteGood. Although Sora is merely the messenger.
DeleteLOVE that cover! Enjoyed the snippet, as always I could place myself right in the scene thanks to your detailed narration of the events...
ReplyDeleteThank you. I enjoy imagining other worlds.
DeleteGreat snippet, and I totally relate to being interrupted haha
ReplyDeleteYes. But, she'll have to leave the triales soon.
DeleteHope Sora isn't calling with bad news, though I have a feeling ...
ReplyDeleteIt's not exactly bad, but it will interrupt Nikki's studies. And, it's dangerous.
DeleteYou show Nikki's devotion to her work well. Like the others, I'm curious about Sora and what she wants. Striking cover!
ReplyDeleteYes - I like bright colors, but this cover is exceptionally striking.
DeleteFascinating snippet. Other worlds are always an adventure. This sounds like a complicated place, I think I love it!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you like the world.
DeleteYou have such a talent for pulling us right into the scene with your visuals.
ReplyDeleteThank you - very encouraging.
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