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I’m posting
excerpts from Karrik, Book 6 of SciFi
series, Taxyon Space.
Karrik, an alien
merman, lives in a small room in a hospice on his home world after being
crippled in battle. Because their society is intolerant of physical weakness, his
brothers, Alarik and Baswin, paid for his care by serving as spies on Earth. Alarik has just returned from Earth and is visiting Karrik for the first
time in many months. Karrik cannot speak more than a stuttered word. You
can read last week’s excerpt here: https://auroraspringer.blogspot.com/2023/03/gestures-instead-of-words-excerpt-from.html
Alarik gave a rueful laugh. “Our disguises worked well for half
a year. We sent reports to the Triarch about the Earthers. He was especially
interested in their sentiments about Warrish. They call us alien mermen.”
“Urg?” Karrik arched his eyebrows.
“One day, some of the Earthers detected the Triarch’s holographic
transmission to me. Baswin and I had to flee. By good fortune, I had already hooked
a flight to their red planet. I took passage on their space ferry to the outer
planets and dove into cover in our Watcher outpost in the oceans of Europa.”
Ten
sentences and a few more
Karrik spluttered a question, “B…Bas?”
“In our last conversation, he said he planned to swim to our
embassy on Earth.” Alarik rubbed a hand over his face. “I don’t know where he
is. He did not reply to my last message. Perhaps he has no privacy to transmit
a message safely.”
Uttering a groan of distress, Karrik squeezed his brother’s hand in sympathy.
Karrik Kenton Tallis, Third of the Flaming
Comets, endures a miserable existence in a hospice on his home planet. Unable
to walk or speak more than a single word, he misses his older brothers and is
unaware of their sacrifice to ensure his care. He cherishes a faint hope of
recovering his health.
Karrik’s life improves when his brothers return
to Rishalt with their human companions. Alarik, First of the Triad, is
escorting Phoebe Wong with her brother and a mysterious alien object for an
audience with Prime Jadel. The middle brother, Baswin, is traveling home with
Holly and Rosie Moon. The Moon sisters are enrolled in an experimental program
to train human psychics to navigate in hyperspace and relieve Earth’s
governments of their onerous reliance on Warrish tripilots. Rosie, a psychic
healer, desires to help Karrik despite the conflict with her duty to humanity.
But the water world of Rishalt holds many
hazards, both above and beneath the waves. Can the alien treasure help the
three brothers to conquer the challenges and unite with their chosen partners?
Read the scintillating story of the Flaming Comet brothers to learn the
answers.
Karrik’s story is available in ebook and
audiobook: https://books2read.com/u/3LNnVD
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His frustration to communicate breaks my heart! Starella Illustrated (whoops, that sounded like a men's magazine). How exciting. Off to check it out . . .
ReplyDeleteThank you! It's my first kickstarter, so I'm a little nervous.
DeleteWhat a unique concept - he planned to swim to the Embassy. :-) Tweeted. Good luck on kickstarter. My blog link is broken - https://daryldevore.blogspot.com/2023/03/with-each-movement-white-light-grew_02023260774.html
ReplyDeleteBaswin is an alien merman and can live underwater, although the journey proved more hazardous than he expected (see book 'Baswin')
DeleteWrenching...at least he can utter syllables that approach being understandable. Great excerpt!
ReplyDeleteThanks. Communication will soon become easier.
DeleteI like the depiction of the family unit--and how they take care of each other.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes on your Kickstarter!
Thank you. The brothers are close, and they will gain loving partners.
DeleteMysteries upon mysteries. Enjoyed the excerpt!
ReplyDeleteGreat. The backstory should be familiar to readers of the earlier books.
DeleteI feel his frustration! But also the love fot his family. nice one!
ReplyDeleteGreat!
DeleteHow frustrating that he can barely speak. Like others, I like seeing how the family takes care of each other.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad their closeness comes over clearly.
DeleteLove how they can communicate well and their care is well conveyed.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteIt seems as though he communicates better with his sibling. Not sure if he's just getting better or if the relationship between them makes it easier. His concern for them is so sweet. Tweeted.
ReplyDeleteHe is getting better mentally, and Alarik is more willing to listen than his nurses.
DeleteGreat snippet but now I'm left with the fear Bas has been eaten by sharks. LOL
ReplyDeleteLol - he did encounter sharks on his swim!
DeleteI hope Bas is okay! Hard if you can't communicate your worry.
ReplyDeleteInterested to hear about your kickstarter success! Good luck.
Alarik is very anxious to hear from Baswin.
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