Saturday, March 11, 2023

Gestures instead of words - Excerpt from Karrik for #WeWriWa and #SnippetSunday

 


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I’m continuing the scene from Karrik, Book 6 of SciFi series, Taxyon Space.  

Karrik, an alien merman, lives in a small room in a hospice on his home world after being crippled in battle. His brothers paid for his care by serving as spies on Earth. His older brother Alarik has just returned from Earth and is visiting Karrik for the first time in many months. Karrik cannot speak more than a stuttered word. You can read last week’s emotional excerpt here: https://auroraspringer.blogspot.com/2023/03/a-reunion-excerpt-from-karrik-for.html

“You seem to be alert,” Alarik said. “Can you understand me?”

Uttering an inarticulate grunt, Karrik pressed his brother’s fingers again.

“Urish. You can understand, but you cannot speak words clearly. Is that correct?”

Another squeeze and Karrik panted, “Uh…Uh…Urish.”

“You don’t need to speak. Press my fingers if you agree. If you wish, I’ll explain why Baswin and I were unable to visit you.”

Ten sentences and a few more

Karrik pressed for yes.

“After you were injured, we were desperate to secure proper care for you. You were unconscious for days. Even after you woke, you seemed befuddled, as helpless and incoherent as a baby. Triarch Webale offered to place you in the care of the Pearl Sisters as an inducement for Baswin and me to serve as his undercover spies on Earth. We had minor surgery to merge into Earther society.” He held up his hand and waggled the fingers. “Look at what we surrendered.”

Marveling at the sacrifice of a finger, Karrik touched his forefinger to each of the five fingers on his brother’s hand. The full implications filtered slowly into his fuzzy mind. His elder brothers were mutilated, and like him, they were dishonored and unfit for normal society.


 Karrik, Book 6 in Taxyon Space

The fates of six people are at stake.

Karrik Kenton Tallis, Third of the Flaming Comets, endures a miserable existence in a hospice on his home planet. Unable to walk or speak more than a single word, he misses his older brothers and is unaware of their sacrifice to ensure his care. He cherishes a faint hope of recovering his health.

Karrik’s life improves when his brothers return to Rishalt with their human companions. Alarik, First of the Triad, is escorting Phoebe Wong with her brother and a mysterious alien object for an audience with Prime Jadel. The middle brother, Baswin, is traveling home with Holly and Rosie Moon. The Moon sisters are enrolled in an experimental program to train human psychics to navigate in hyperspace and relieve Earth’s governments of their onerous reliance on Warrish tripilots. Rosie, a psychic healer, desires to help Karrik despite the conflict with her duty to humanity.

But the water world of Rishalt holds many hazards, both above and beneath the waves. Can the alien treasure help the three brothers to conquer the challenges and unite with their chosen partners? Read the scintillating story of the Flaming Comet brothers to learn the answers.

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18 comments:

  1. Wonderful scene and ouch. Poor Alarik. Poor finger

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    1. Yes. Their society is intolerant of physical defects, so Alarik agreed to this sacrifice to ensure his younger brother had good care.

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  2. I like the way the backstory is woven in, and I like the closeness of the brothers and what they've done so Karrick is well looked after.

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    1. Thanks. Karrik's older brothers rejected their parents' proposal to abandon him, adopt a healthy brother and enter an arranged marriage.

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  3. Whoa! Where will it go from here?

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    1. The two earlier books tell Alarik and Baswin's stories. Their reunion with Karrik will bring him to a new healthy life with a woman form Earth.

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  4. Their sacrifice shows their love and concern for their brother. Nicely done.

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  5. Very well done snippet. The consequences are spreading...

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    1. Thanks. Alarik understood the consequences of his sacrifice. He has gained a lady love and temporary residence in the Earth embassy.

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  6. So touching. I love how they are reunited now.

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  7. The love of family. Great snippet.

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    1. Yes indeed. The bond between three brothers is especially strong in their society.

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  8. He seems so much better just by his brother being there. Hopefully his brother's sacrifice will make Karrick more accepting of his own limitations. Great snippet!

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    1. Yes. you've got the idea. But, his brothers and their friends will open up new possibilities for poor Karrik.

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  9. Powerful example of filial love here...

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