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I’m continuing
the scene from Karrik, Book 6 of SciFi
series, Taxyon Space.
Karrik, an alien
merman, lives in a small room in a hospice on his home world after being
crippled in battle. His brothers paid for his care by serving as spies on
Earth. His older brother Alarik has just returned from
Earth and is visiting Karrik for the first time in many months. Karrik cannot
speak more than a stuttered word. You can read last week’s emotional excerpt
here: https://auroraspringer.blogspot.com/2023/03/a-reunion-excerpt-from-karrik-for.html
“You seem to be alert,” Alarik said. “Can you understand me?”
Uttering an inarticulate grunt, Karrik pressed his brother’s
fingers again.
“Urish. You can understand, but you cannot speak words clearly.
Is that correct?”
Another squeeze and Karrik panted, “Uh…Uh…Urish.”
“You don’t need to speak. Press my fingers if you agree. If you
wish, I’ll explain why Baswin and I were unable to visit you.”
Ten
sentences and a few more
Karrik pressed for yes.
“After you were injured, we were desperate to secure proper care
for you. You were unconscious for days. Even after you woke, you seemed befuddled,
as helpless and incoherent as a baby. Triarch Webale offered to place you in
the care of the Pearl Sisters as an inducement for Baswin and me to serve as his
undercover spies on Earth. We had minor surgery to merge into Earther society.”
He held up his hand and waggled the fingers. “Look at what we surrendered.”
Marveling at the sacrifice of a
finger, Karrik touched his forefinger to each of the five fingers on his
brother’s hand. The full implications filtered slowly into his fuzzy mind. His
elder brothers were mutilated, and like him, they were dishonored and unfit for
normal society.
Karrik, Book 6 in Taxyon Space
The
fates of six people are at stake.
Karrik Kenton Tallis, Third of the Flaming
Comets, endures a miserable existence in a hospice on his home planet. Unable
to walk or speak more than a single word, he misses his older brothers and is
unaware of their sacrifice to ensure his care. He cherishes a faint hope of
recovering his health.
Karrik’s life improves when his brothers return
to Rishalt with their human companions. Alarik, First of the Triad, is
escorting Phoebe Wong with her brother and a mysterious alien object for an
audience with Prime Jadel. The middle brother, Baswin, is traveling home with
Holly and Rosie Moon. The Moon sisters are enrolled in an experimental program
to train human psychics to navigate in hyperspace and relieve Earth’s
governments of their onerous reliance on Warrish tripilots. Rosie, a psychic
healer, desires to help Karrik despite the conflict with her duty to humanity.
But the water world of Rishalt holds many
hazards, both above and beneath the waves. Can the alien treasure help the
three brothers to conquer the challenges and unite with their chosen partners?
Read the scintillating story of the Flaming Comet brothers to learn the
answers.
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Wonderful scene and ouch. Poor Alarik. Poor finger
ReplyDeleteYes. Their society is intolerant of physical defects, so Alarik agreed to this sacrifice to ensure his younger brother had good care.
DeleteI like the way the backstory is woven in, and I like the closeness of the brothers and what they've done so Karrick is well looked after.
ReplyDeleteThanks. Karrik's older brothers rejected their parents' proposal to abandon him, adopt a healthy brother and enter an arranged marriage.
DeleteWhoa! Where will it go from here?
ReplyDeleteThe two earlier books tell Alarik and Baswin's stories. Their reunion with Karrik will bring him to a new healthy life with a woman form Earth.
DeleteTheir sacrifice shows their love and concern for their brother. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely.
DeleteVery well done snippet. The consequences are spreading...
ReplyDeleteThanks. Alarik understood the consequences of his sacrifice. He has gained a lady love and temporary residence in the Earth embassy.
DeleteSo touching. I love how they are reunited now.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad it resonates with you.
DeleteThe love of family. Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteYes indeed. The bond between three brothers is especially strong in their society.
DeleteHe seems so much better just by his brother being there. Hopefully his brother's sacrifice will make Karrick more accepting of his own limitations. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteYes. you've got the idea. But, his brothers and their friends will open up new possibilities for poor Karrik.
DeletePowerful example of filial love here...
ReplyDeleteExactly what I wanted.
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