Saturday, August 13, 2016

What guy? Snippet from Starrella Falls for #WeWriWa #YA #Supergirl Adventure

Welcome to another Sunday with Weekend Writing Warriors. Here, writers in different genres showcase their stories with 8-10 sentences. Join the fun and read our snippets.

Today, I’m continuing the scene from my new release: Starrella Falls, Book 2 in the Secret Supers. You can read the first chapters HERE

Background: Toby and Estelle left the pub by the rear exit and the man Croaker attacks Estelle.
The final sentence was: He dropped the dart, cried a Zarnoth curse and lunged at Estelle.

Racing across the parking lot, Toby grabbed Croaker’s arm and swung him round. In a blur of motion, a second dart shone in Croaker’s hand. Toby punched his fist into Croaker’s chin.
Croaker crumpled. Catching him under the arms, Toby eased him to the ground.
Brakes squealed and a man yelled, “Hey!” Mark Copper jumped out of his white sedan and Diane slid out of the passenger side. “What’s going on?” Mark called.
Straightening and gazing at Mark, Toby drawled, “It’s that guy who’s wanted for murder.”
“What guy?” Mark strode over and stared at the body.

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29 comments:

  1. Oh, new characters in this situation. I hope they don't interfere. Have fun at the conference!

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    1. New characters in this scene but not new in the series. Diane is Estelle's best friend.

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  2. Hope you enjoyed your conference, Aurora.

    I always enjoy the dynamism of your action scenes. Excellent hook.

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  3. Hope you enjoyed your conference, Aurora.

    I always enjoy the dynamism of your action scenes. Excellent hook.

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    1. I write action scenes whenever possible!

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  5. And the plot thickens with that information about him! Great snippet.

    ~Joyce Scarbrough

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    1. Well, the characters have seen the wanted ads, but you're starting later in the story.

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  6. Now that's an efficient take-down! Great action.

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  7. Great action scene. Enjoyed the snippet.

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  8. I loved the "What guy?" Such a great natural reaction.

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  9. and the plot thickens! Great snippet.

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  10. That guy right there! I want to jump up and down here, pointing! LOL! Great snippet!

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  11. Great action. The writing is very crisp.

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  12. Nice action scene ... and interesting last line.

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  13. Talk about a quick take down! Why can't they all be that easy to handle? LOL.

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