Welcome to another
Saturday of Science Fiction & Fantasy and read snippets exchanged by several
writers. http://scififansat.blogspot.com/
My contribution this
week is from my unedited WIP, Grand Master’s Mate, Book
3 in the Grand Master’s Trilogy. This scene was inspired by Jupiter Ascending. The interrupted wedding occurs early in the book. I apologize for the repetition to anyone from
weekend writing warriors.
The
Director of the Center for Life Science opened the ceremony. His slow, sonorous
voice tended to send his listeners to sleep and today was no exception. He
began with a long winded introduction to the bride and groom and their
excellent qualities.
Bored
by the lecture, Athanor leaned back in his chair and closed his eyes. In
contrast, Violet’s green eyes gleamed with delight as she gazed at the wedding
couple. She had never attended a marriage rite and Tessa was her special
friend.
While
she watched the ceremony, Violet kept her senses tuned to Athanor. She feared
he would fall asleep and inadvertently expose everyone to his raw power when he
woke. His mind hazed and she sent him a mental pinch.
Suppressing
a yawn, he sent unconvincingly, “I’m
awake.” His thoughts sharpened and he griped, “Next time, remind me not to accept an invitation to a wedding.”
“You weren’t invited,” she snickered
mentally and squeezed his hand.
After
the Director finished his introduction, the rest of the ceremony was short and
simple. The mediator offered a blessing and Phineas slid the ring over Tessa’s
slender finger; Violet’s eyes misted, anticipating their happiness.
Boom; A
red explosion shattered the glass panes in the curved wall of the atrium.
Books 1 & 2 are published.
Your comments are
welcome.
Ouch! I wasn't expecting the final line - nice change of pace! (All right, so I feel sorry for Tessa having her day spoiled, but hey - that's what happens in action-adventure!)
ReplyDeleteWould I have a tame wedding scene at the beginning of the book?
DeleteDarn those explosions always interrupting beautiful scenes. Nice twist at the end!
ReplyDeleteIt will get worse.
DeleteI liked the mental jab she gave him and the setup for the twist at the end by lulling us in to the ceremony.
ReplyDeleteOne can never go wrong by adding an explosion to a scene! Fun stuff.
ReplyDeleteAnd more to come!
DeleteSounds like someone has an objection to the wedding.
ReplyDeleteTo put it mildly.
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