Welcome to another Sunday with Weekend Writing Warriors. Here, writers in different genres showcase their stories with 8-10 sentences. Join the fun and read our snippets.
I want to show you a different scene today from my new release Grand Master’s Mate. If you want to read what happened on the Moon Illoris, you can read a longer excerpt here: http://auroraspringer.blogspot.com/2015/11/srf-brigade-showcase-grand-masters-mate.html
The new scene is on the ocean planet of AguaSalva, where humans live on islands and most lifeforms inhabit the seas. Ravaleen is a human Grand Master and Bollerol has five flexible limbs.
A delicate sail of pale yellow swung into view, flying above an almond colored boat with brown stripes. When it drew closer, Violet saw the boat resembled a giant cockle shell. The thin central membrane of the sail protruded from the fleshy base of the marine mollusk. The huge half shells were taller than a man and the sail towered three times higher.
The shell boat steered into the pavilion and halted near Violet. The sail membrane folded down and the shell halves rocked in the gentle waves.
“Board the Callama,” Ravaleen said, “Bollerol will accompany you as a translator.”
Thoughts wafted into Violet’s mind. “Wish, wash, ride on me; three limbs, four limbs twice, and Bollerol five limbs.” The slow rhythms of Callama’s voice merged into the background swell of the sea. No wonder the translator did not recognize the shell animal’s speech.
To celebrate completion of the Trilogy, Grand Master’s Pawn is only 99c this month
Grand Master’s Pawn: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00TP1N5PM
Grand Master’s Game: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B0104OFJJ8
Grand Master’s Mate: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B018EHAA7S
As always, your comments are welcome. Would you like to read more about the marine life on AguaSalva, or have another combat scene?
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Such an incredible world you build in your stories, Aurora! And you do an excellent job of showing. :-)ReplyDelete
Thanks. I enjoyed creating this ocean world.Delete
I love the boat! what an awesome idea! Nice job, as always Aurora.ReplyDelete
Callama is one of my favorite creatures.Delete
Creative, using the sea as inspiration.ReplyDelete
The whole ocean with several marvels and hidden dangers.Delete
Love the boat, and you describe it perfectly. I would think anybody who lives on an ocean world would have transportation just like that. Definitely looking forward to more!ReplyDelete
Callama can dive too.Delete
What a great idea- giant shellfish as boat. Such an intriguing world.ReplyDelete
Thanks - this ocean world works well.Delete
What a creative world. I enjoyed reading your snippet and I look forward to reading more of this story.ReplyDelete
To be continued next week!Delete
Blown away by the entire excerpt, use of color as always, the boat, the alien speec cadence...great snippet!ReplyDelete
A scene without a fight for a change, and no hazards yet!Delete
Come again next week!ReplyDelete
I love that the boat talks. I noticed all the colors, too.ReplyDelete
Callama is a live animal, useful for transport.Delete
Yay, release days! I love the visuals you described. Awesome writing!ReplyDelete
Ooh, intriguing. So many questions, and such a vivid description. Thanks so much for sharing!ReplyDelete