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Today, I’m continuing
the scene on the ocean planet from my new release Grand Master’s Mate. Apparently
I generated some confusion last week. The eels, or snake-like sea creatures,
are the victims not the attackers. The Meilai is the Grand Master Ravaleen who
lives on this planet, but does not venture underwater.
You can read last
week’s snippet here –
“We’ll fight beside you,” Violet sent to the submarine snakes.
“Tell them to keep well away from my psi blasts,” Athanor
instructed.
Violet passed on the
message with her addition. “Move back
from us when I give the warning. The Grand Master’s power is deadly.”
“No Grand Master has ever swum to our aid before. The Meilai keeps to
the surface waters,” the eel leader cried in disbelief.
Peering up, Violet
glimpsed the pink halo as the pointed bud of Amarylla descended through the
gloom. Behind the flower Grand Master, the pale oval of Callama’s closed shell
gleamed in the dark waters.
Violet sent to the
eels, “Two Grand Masters have come today; lead us to your battle.”
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The Grand Masters are unexpected allies, then. I hope using their powers underwater doesn't result in complications.
ReplyDeleteNot really, although Violet does have a harpoon instead of a laser.
DeleteA Battle with, and to support sentient eels! Aurora, I LOVE the idea! Awesome!
ReplyDeleteA Battle with, and to support sentient eels! Aurora, I LOVE the idea! Awesome!
ReplyDeleteWell, we already have a sentient flower and shell!
DeleteI like the way the Grand Master and the pawn work together.
ReplyDeleteThey're partners in many ways
DeleteInteresting! Glad they will all work together. But I hope the Grand Masters power isn't deadly to those on the same side. :)
ReplyDeleteHe has to be careful to shield.
DeleteLove the talking eels. I'm glad they're on the same side.
ReplyDeleteWe may get to the "bad guys" soon.
DeleteThe battle is about to begin! Great snippet! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteI love everything about this scene you've been sharing, especially the unusual setting. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteSo unusual and creative! Keep up the good work :D
ReplyDeleteThanks!
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