Welcome to another Sunday with Weekend Writing Warriors. Here, writers in different genres showcase their stories with 8-10 sentences. Join the fun and read our snippets.
Today, I’m continuing
the scene on the ocean planet from my new release Grand Master’s Mate. By this
stage, the Grand Master, Athanor, has learned not to trust entirely to his
powers since their enemies can nullify them. In this scene, he and Violet wear
protective underwater suits with air and jetpacks. Amarylla looks like a giant
flower with three pink petals and gangling roots. Callama is a clam shell with
a central membrane forming a sail.
You can read last
week’s snippet here –
http://auroraspringer.blogspot.com/2016/01/sciencefiction-snippet-from-grand.html
Three
pairs of bright yellow eyes on the tips of dark ribbons converged on Callama.
The ribbon eels wriggled around the shell boat and Violet understood their
vibrations, “Our homes are cracked. Our
children are eaten.”
“Death, slaughter, craze the sand city,”
Callama’s slow hum was quickened by horror.
“Dive faster by Dagda’s horn,” Athanor
urged. Gripping Violet, he rotated until their heads pointed down and zoomed
towards the murky bottom. As they dived
farther from the sunlight, the green water darkened to murky black. Only the
blue beams of Athanor’s eyes penetrated the gloom. The sinuous bodies glistened
each time they swam into Athanor’s blue beams.
A
larger snake with a body as thick as a man’s paused nearby. Its amber eyes
shone in the dark and it urged the smaller eels, “Gather together for a mass attack on the invaders.”
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Uh oh. This sounds bad. Good visual writing, Aurora. :-)
ReplyDeleteYes, the bad guys are attacking.
DeleteOh dear, I'm guessing Athanor and Violet are the invaders. More great stuff here, as usual!
ReplyDeleteWait and see.
DeleteThey're in (more) trouble now! Exciting stuff.
ReplyDeleteOh no! How tragic! And now they are in greater danger. Yikes!
ReplyDeleteIt's a wild planet.
DeleteCreative and interesting creatures! My alien imagination is lacking. Great job painting that picture :D
ReplyDeleteImagining alien creatures is fun!
DeleteMy worst nightmare - trapped underwater with giant eels, etc. Vividly described, always enjoy your snippets!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteGiven how different these creatures are, I wonder what their idea of war is like.
ReplyDeleteThey said their homes were cracked and their children eaten - sounds like an alien war to me.
DeleteI absolutely love all the colors you put into your writing, Aurora. It makes it so much easier to visualize. :D
ReplyDeleteI aim to put the reader in the scene.
DeleteExcellent as always, Aurora. You are very successful in drawing your reader in- every time!
ReplyDeleteExcellent as always, Aurora. You are very successful in drawing your reader in- every time!
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