Welcome to another
Sunday with Weekend Writing Warriors and Snippet Sunday. Sample
the work of a new author. Read snippets of stories in different genres.
I’m continuing with
snippets from my new science fiction novella. Writing and editing are going
well. For now, I’ll continue from last week. The heroine, Josie, has just
learned that her planet is in imminent danger of invasion by the Emperor’s
fleet. She is accompanied by her crew, Butch and Drin. (You may note certain modern
parallels, although my plot predates current events.)
You can read last
week’s snippet at https://auroraspringer.blogspot.com/2022/02/time-to-fly-next-excerpt-from-my-scifi.html
The final lines reveal her decision: She swiveled to face the Star Condor and aimed her forefinger at the sky. “We’re flying. Pronto.”
“Great,” Drin exhaled in a rush
of relief.
Josie strode up the short ramp.
Within a minute, she and her crew were buckling into their seats on the bridge.
“Wake up, Nina,” she called to
the Condor’s AI. “We’re going for liftoff.”
She ran a perfunctory flight
check. Speed was essential and she and Butch had done a full inspection only
half an hour earlier.
The engines sang as the ship
raced along the concrete of the airfield.
An irate voice sounded on the
com, “Star Condor, Spaceport Traffic Control here. What are you doing with that
ship?”
Ten lines plus
a little more:
Josie called, “The Star Condor’s
lifting off.”
“No ships can leave the planet.
Governor’s orders.”
Hitting the starter, Josie
shouted, “We have to deliver a valuable package.”
Under tight control, the ship
shot up through the clouds. Nothing on the planet could stop them now.
As the Condor soared above the atmosphere,
Josie felt the familiar thrill of escaping the drag of gravity at the planet’s
surface.
Seated in the adjacent seat, Drin
said, “Hey boss, what is this valuable cargo?”
“An old vase. It’s my Aunt
Gabrielle’s inheritance from my father. The vase is an ancient Solarian
artifact, an ugly greenish color, and extremely valuable.”
“Okay.” Drin quirked a grimace. “What’s
our destination, boss?”
“Compute a course for Wick’s
Paradise.”
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Oh, curious as to what they'll find at Wick's Paradise.
ReplyDeleteHer new love interest is one thing.
DeleteThere's a part of me that feels exhilarated by the idea of breaking rules. All for a good cause, of course!
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Thanks. Yes. It adds an edge to the story when a normally law-abiding person disobeys an order.
DeleteYour link in the WWW listing is broken but I tracked you down. What a great active scene. Love the way every word, every sentence conveys the immediacy of the situation.
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DeleteThanks for appreciating the scene.
Enjoyed the snippet and the feeling of urgency you conveyed. Now this vase is a curious thing, can't wait to learn more!
ReplyDeleteThe vase is a running joke for the first part of the story.
DeleteI tracked you down, too, from last week's link. Those things happen.
ReplyDeleteSounds like she barely got off planet in time. Tense!
Good. She's happy to leave.
DeleteI'm curious about the vase. Loved the imagery of it. Great snippet. I could feel the urgency of the situation.
ReplyDeleteThanks. That was my goal.
DeleteEnjoyed the snippet, great descriptions.
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ReplyDeleteI love the "valuable cargo." I hope the vase survives the trip. (I'm starting to think of it as one of the characters. I think it needs its own story arc.)
ReplyDeleteThe vase certainly becomes the butt of several jokes.
DeleteExciting snippet. Felt like I was taking off with them.
ReplyDeleteGood.
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