Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors and Snippet
Sunday. Sample the work of a
new author. Read snippets of stories in different genres.
I’m
posting from Karrik, Book 6 of SciFi
series, Taxyon Space. I skipped last week since I was visiting
family in North Carolina. The previous week, somehow my post didn’t register at the
WeWriWa site. You can read it at https://auroraspringer.blogspot.com/2023/02/an-alien-water-world-excerpt-from.html
Brief
recap: due to crippling battle injuries, Karrik is in a hospice on the aliens’
home world of Rishalt. My earlier posts introduced Karrik’s older brother
Alarik and his human lover, Phoebe. Their story began in Book 4, Alarik. Alarik and Phoebe
have arrived on Rishalt.
I’m
jumping to the next scene with Karrik.
Karrik turned his head to gaze at the window. The upper section
of the window was open to air the room and a gentle breeze caressed his face.
The breeze carried the scents of herbs and flowers overlaid with salt and an
occasional whiff of fish. It cooled his fevered brain and evoked his memories
of the sea.
The window overlooked a courtyard enclosed by white walls. From
his prone position in the hammock, he glimpsed wispy clouds in the cyan sky.
The wind ruffled the leaves in the upper branches of shrubs, but metal bars in
the lower pane obscured the flower beds. The swish of water hinted at the pond
in the middle of the courtyard.
Nine
sentences and a few more
Sometimes people visited the courtyard garden. He heard laughter
and splashes. He wished he could join the happy people. But, they would despise
him for his missing limbs and lack of speech. They would ignore him and whisper
behind his back.
The door hissed open.
The cheery voice of one of the Pearl Sisters called, “Calm seas,
Karrik. Wake up. You have a visitor today.” She walked to his hammock, raised
his head onto the pillow and pulled the blanket up to his chest.
Some visitors were good. Others were not. They poked at his body
and asked too many questions despite his inability to speak the answers. Which
type was this visitor?
Karrik, Book 6 in Taxyon Space: The fates of six people are at stake.
Karrik Kenton Tallis, Third of the Flaming
Comets, endures a miserable existence in a hospice on his home planet. Unable
to walk or speak more than a single word, he misses his older brothers and is
unaware of their sacrifice to ensure his care. He cherishes a faint hope of
recovering his health.
Karrik’s life improves when his brothers return
to Rishalt with their human companions. Alarik, First of the Triad, is
escorting Phoebe Wong with her brother and a mysterious alien object for an
audience with Prime Jadel. The middle brother, Baswin, is traveling home with
Holly and Rosie Moon. The Moon sisters are enrolled in an experimental program
to train human psychics to navigate in hyperspace and relieve Earth’s
governments of their onerous reliance on Warrish tripilots. Rosie, a psychic
healer, desires to help Karrik despite the conflict with her duty to humanity.
But the water world of Rishalt holds many
hazards, both above and beneath the waves. Can the alien treasure help the
three brothers to conquer the challenges and unite with their chosen partners?
Read the scintillating story of the Flaming Comet brothers to learn the
answers.
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Nicely done bringing his emotions across. Nice snippet.
ReplyDeleteThank you. He'll have a pleasant surprise.
DeleteWith his fears of people seeing him - I hope the visitor is a nice one. Tweeted.
ReplyDeleteIt is.
DeleteSo sad... and what will the visit bring?
ReplyDeleteYou're correct. He's miserable at the beginning of the story.
DeleteCan't wait to find out which type of visitor he has! Loved all the details you put into the snippet...
ReplyDeletethanks. He's thinking more coherently, and his life will improve.
DeleteNice emotion conveyance. I felt nervous for Karrik.
ReplyDeleteGood!
DeleteI love how you portray his own distance from himself, as if he's afraid of what he is but cannot fully distance himself and let go
ReplyDeleteAn interesting perspective
DeleteI felt so sad when he was thinking he'd like to go out and be with people, but they would laugh at him because of his handicaps. I only hope his visitor won't do that. He needs some light in his life. Tweeted.
ReplyDeleteHis life brightens over the course of the story.
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