Welcome to another
Sunday with Weekend Writing Warriors.
Here, writers in different genres showcase their stories with 8-10 sentences.
Join the fun and read our snippets.
Today,
I’ll continue the wasp-spider attack scene from Grand Master’s Game.
Last week’s snippet can be read here –
http://auroraspringer.blogspot.com/2015/10/halloween-snippet-for-wewriwa-from.html
The final sentence is “She was stuck.”
Something grabbed her arm. A large hand thrust a dagger into the
monster’s eye, twisting deep into the head; a blood stained hand in a familiar
black leather sleeve. Green blood spouted around the blade. The monster jerked
and stilled, its jaws still clamped on her neck. Athanor’s grim face hovered
over her startled eyes, his teeth bared in a fierce grimace. He grasped the
ends of the horrid mandibles, gritted his teeth and exerted his full strength
to open the jaws.
Violet toppled onto Athanor’s knees. In the background, the
stump of heavy footsteps preceded a shout of command and the zap of heavy
weapons.
The cavalry had arrived, belatedly.
Books 1 & 2 of
the Trilogy are published.
Grand Master’s Pawn: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00TP1N5PM
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99c for November
Grand Master’s Game: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B0104OFJJ8
Permafree short story set in the Grand Master's Universe:
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Great descriptive writing, Aurora! Easy to visualize the scene. I really hate spiders. Good choice for a monster. :-)
ReplyDeleteYour writing is always full of vivid action, Aurora.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Ed
DeleteThanks. They relax at times in between the action.
ReplyDeleteWell, the cavalry was late, but not TOO late, thankfully. Still, every second spent with gigantic, deadly spiders is one second too many, as far as I'm concerned. :-)
ReplyDeleteThe cavalry was useless.
DeleteReally like this snippet... but why did it have to be spiders? *whimpers*
ReplyDeleteGiant spiders! The funny thing is - I don't enjoy horror stories.
DeleteThey were doing pretty well without the cavalry! Loved all the action in this scene (this week and last week), excellent excerpt!
ReplyDeleteThanks! Should I try an inaction scene one week?
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