Welcome
to another Sunday with Weekend
Writing Warriors. Meet writers in various genres and read 8-10
sentence snippets of their stories.
Okay,
I’m biting the bullet and offering snippets from my WIP. It’s at
59k
words and I’m editing. Among other things, I have to deal with
killing off one minor character and rewriting him out of later
scenes. This story has several deaths.
Current
Tag line: What
alien creatures lurk under the ice crust of Europa?
Here
are the next few lines of Chapter one. Dr. Nikki Bell is traveling to
Europa to study the alien life in the ocean.
It’s
not a final version and any suggestions will be especially
appreciated.
You
can read last week’s snippet here:
https://auroraspringer.blogspot.com/2017/08/partitions-clanged-shut-snippet-from.html
The
ship’s layout fixed in her mind, she kicked off, traveling
diagonally from wall to wall to propel herself through the empty
corridor to the nearest life craft.
Overhead lights flickered and faded to black, leaving only the line
of red arrows marking the direction of the exit. The corridor bucked.
She banged against the wall and stumbled onto her knees, cringing at
the creak of overstrained metal.
The
siren’s whine cut to silence.
What
the Styx did that mean? She had to get out. Nikki struggled upright
and flipped on her headlamp. The bay with the lifepod was a few steps
ahead. Its door was shut and no one was visible in the annex.
I will probably miss one or both of the next two weekends due to traveling in Europe. So, here's a freebie to keep you amused -
FREE
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Master’s Cat -
Short Prequel to the Grand Masters’
Galaxy
When
Grand Master Griffin investigates a wrecked spacecraft, his efforts
to rescue the survivors lead to feline disruptions of his plans.
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International
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always, I’ll be happy to reply to your comments.
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writers.
Exciting and very tense! I can't wait to keep reading and have my fingers crossed for her. Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteThanks - I'll probably skip the next couple of weekends.
DeleteOh my, what a scary snippet. Nice job, Aurora. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks - it's just beginning.
DeleteScary and tense. Great beginning.
ReplyDeleteThis sounds like a great story. It really is a tense situation.
ReplyDeleteAnd this is only the start of several twists.
DeleteIntense scene!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the freebie. Picked up a copy.
And Safe Travels!
You're welcome. Cat is a general favorite.
DeleteThanks!
Things seem to be going from bad to worse.
ReplyDeleteAnd they will spiral downward later in the chapter.
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