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Sunday. Sample the work of a
new author. Read snippets of stories in different genres.
Here’s the next excerpt
from Karrik, Book 6 of my SciFi series, Taxyon
Space.
Background:
Karrik lost an arm and a leg in battle and he struggles to speak. He lives in a
hospice on his homeworld of Rishalt. His two brothers are on Earth. In last
week’s excerpt, his oldest brother called (very long distance). Karrik managed
to say, “Hello”, but he cannot say anything else.
You can
read last week’s excerpt at https://auroraspringer.blogspot.com/2023/01/karrik-says-hello-excerpt-for-wewriwa.html
This excerpt follows:
Alarik said, “How are you today?”
Why did Alarik sound disappointed? Did his First not understand
his difficulty in creating a word? Flummoxed by his inability to answer the
question, Karrik merely uttered a frustrated moan.
After an interval, Alarik said, “I’ll call again later.”
The sister said, “He is improving every day. You should see
him.”
“Calm seas, Sister.” The speaker clicked into silence.
Alarik had gone.
Ten
sentences and a few more
Karrik felt bereft. Alone. Where was his brother? Neither Alarik
or Baswin had visited him. Had they ever visited him? He could not remember.
Not since his mind had awoken from a bleak, blank darkness. Their absence left
him confused and lonely.
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It would be awful to be locked in and unable to communicate. In the latter part of my nursing career I took care of a pre-teen boy with a rare congenital disorder. He was completely unable to communicate. I imagine Karrick has a long struggle ahead.
ReplyDeleteIn this case, his condition is not congenital. Solutions will arrive with his brothers.
DeleteHow well this shows the frustration to communicate when the body betrays the mind. I have no doubt that our hero will prevail!
ReplyDeleteOf course - my stories always end in a happy place.
DeleteI hope he'll get his answers soon. must be a terrifying situation.
ReplyDeleteThe answers come gradually, in between a few adventures.
DeleteI don't care about the distance, his brothers should be with him. Their presence would do him a world of good. You've done a great job of showing how alone Karrik feels without his family. Tweeted.
ReplyDeleteI forgot to explain why they are on Earth instead of with Karrik. Their alien society is intolerant of any disability. Karrik's brothers were offered a deal to infiltrate human society in exchange for Karrik's care in the hospice.
DeleteFrustrating situation all the way around. The excerpt was very well done, as always. Sorry to be so late in commenting!
ReplyDeleteThanks! It seemed a slow week for other too.
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