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I’m continuing from the beginning of my wip,
Karrik, Book 6 of SciFi series, Taxyon
Space. In last weeks’ snippet,
Karrik was lying in a room in a hospice run by the Pearl Sisters. He has been in
a semi-comatose state for months. This excerpt explains much of the backstory from the previous books.
He remembered diving under green waves in a vast sea. Two others
swam with him. His brothers. Had he been like them once?
Now, he could not swim. Not with a single arm and leg. Shame stabbed
into his foggy brain. He was only half a man, less than half, because he could
not utter the words beating at his mind. Drenched in misery, he groaned.
Nobody noticed.
Ten
sentences and a few more
He slept, woke, swallowed what they fed him, and slept again.
The monstrous mandibles clamped onto Karrik’s arm, crunching
into his flesh. His battle booster blurred the pain. Bone cracked. He screamed.
And woke, panting with terror.
Just a nightmare.
He reached up to rub his bleary eyes. No hand. His right arm
ended in a stump at the elbow.
He
groaned. It was not a nightmare, but his vivid memory of a real event. The Swarm
attack that left him maimed and as helpless as a newborn. His brothers had
defied their orders and run to rescue him. Where had they gone? Alarik and
Baswin, the energetic First and loyal Second of the Flaming Comets Triad?
His brothers' stories are described in the earlier books, Alarik and Baswin. The three brothers are aliens, Warrish ‘mermen’, and the elite
in their society despise physical deformities.
Monthly Bargain: 99c for Dame Audrey, Medieval Fiction with Fantasy and Romance.
In
fourteenth century Britain, Dame Audrey cherishes her independence as the widow
of a wealthy cloth merchant. But some of the wealthier traders covet her
profitable business and she fears they will invoke the Abbot’s authority to
compel her to marry a man of their choice. Her worst nightmare is suffering
under a cruel husband like the hateful jeweler, Henry Goldsmith, who has
threatened to curb her lively spirits.
Audrey joins
a pilgrimage to Glastonbury to pray for guidance. The holy relics give her no
inspiration nor do her fellow travelers. On the homeward journey, she aids the
dying victim of a brutal robbery. She wins the stranger’s blessing and a gold
brooch with a green dragon. Back in her hometown, the faerie brooch attracts
trouble from thieves of all ranks and the attentions of a handsome yeoman,
Selwyn Drake. As her nightmare looms nearer, she grows desperate to preserve
her freedom.
Can the magic brooch help Audrey evade the schemes to force her into wedlock or must she submit to a brutal husband’s will?
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Sounds like he has many new changes to adapt to. I'm sure it will be hard at first.
ReplyDeleteHis life will improve after his eldest brother arrives.
DeleteVivid, evoking all the right emotions that make the reader want more. I know I do!!
ReplyDeleteThank you! Your encouragement means a lot since this book has been difficult to write.
DeleteTough snippet but well done as always. Happy Holidays...
ReplyDeletethanks. He's tough too. Enjoy the holidays!
DeleteHe is facing a rough future. The nightmare snippet was good. Tweeted.
ReplyDeleteThanks. He's awaking to reality, but it will get better.
DeleteHe's having a terrible time. Excellent excerpt!
ReplyDeletethanks. His alien society is intolerant of physical defects.
DeleteFor a warrior, one who lives by virtue of his strength and prowess, this is such a frightful fate....
ReplyDeleteThat's true. And worse, he's lucky to be in a hospice rather than being thrown on the streets.
DeleteSuch terrible wounds must be devastating to him. No wonder he has nightmares about the experience. I hope someone in the hospice can help him.Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteHelp is coming, slowly.
DeleteWell done on relaying the pain and emotions. Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteThank you. I'll probably skip next week.
DeleteHow terrible that would be. My late father had a stroke in 2004 that paralyzed his right side. I know how humiliated he felt accepting assistance from others. He was very proud. I would feel the same way.
ReplyDeleteYes. I have attempted to show his humiliation and his determination to become more independent.
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